this is deep, see, told you haiku works good for you! :)

but there's a mistake here-last line has 6 sylls:

"a sad ca-sua-l-ty" cuz when you pronounce 'l' in casualty, it's like you're saying: casuality, you get what i mean?

hope this helps,

peace-seeker hito-chan

Well played.

Really, that's all I have to say about it. Lamest review EVARR! _

Oh, and I like it.