wow! really intense, and beautifully written
but i think people don't know the lykke li quote and then it takes away from the evilness of it

Holy Christ. I couldn't stop reading. The tone, the power, the force of this poem is unbelievable. "And if Cupid's got a gun, then he's a shootin.'" What a mind-blowing ending! "I couldn't help but reload my gun." From a sadomasochistic perspective, this line was brilliant. Phenomenal work, Lady Fingers! :D :D :D

Facinating, your protaganist is quite brutal.

Juliet.

This is a great subject matter, but I advise against the ending.