Hey babyy :D,

You story made me smile :D

it was great.

i just think it was a little fast paced..

and some parts need to be a little more expalaind

but its still great :D

better than anything i can do

and your describing words are really well written.

Hehe this was really sweet, i loved it :D

Hey, Steph

Miss you

No, I'm lying.

xD...

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I really like this story, I'm glad that you kept us waiting for the final but

A couple of the thoughts from the baby were a little disjointed in the first section but the rest was great. It was a realistic situation and I loved the fact that he became a vegan. It was cool seeing the characters grow up and seeing how they changed. The twist with the kissing question in the cafeteria really threw me...lol...

The whole story was really cute

Keep it coming!

Just cause i cans:

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aww that was so sweet! :)

This was kinda sweet :)

I loved it.

I loved it alot.

Haha. ]

It was like a good short film, ya know?

Woulda loved it in a longer form,

so maybe, if you wanted to, a full story?

Different guys, different situations, different story,

but if its anyhting like this

it'd be amazing. ]

that was adorable! Ethan is awesome, and I liked the whole going through the years thing.

Very cute.

Didn't quite understand the whole "skipping huge sections of time". That was mean of me to start with negative comments. I really enjoyed the story, some of your best work yet. I'm a homophobe, but still largely enjoyed the neding. Great story 9/10

Good story - 8/10

It was... nice, I guess. Kind of weird. And yeah, the ending's really abrupt. It doesn't even show the kissing. Maybe that's artistic or something, but frankly, I was actually a little annoyed. I did like this, though, for the post part. Everything except the non-kissing. I really liked when he was crying. It was very attractive. I liked it.

Nice ending, faster than I thought.

Really well done story and I think it's not that unrealistic.

Ethan's a very special character too, unique I think.

Keep the stories coming! -Pours more oil-

i thought it was really well written. it had me guessing till the end!

i'll def be folling your writings!

This is very cute, and in my opinion, seems very realistic. Just because Ethen kind of jumps out in very rebelious ways in part of his life, doesn't mean that it's just a fairy tale that'll never happen, I think what he did, was pretty damn brave. I enjoyed reading this quite a bit. :3 Ethen Eric Oh yeah, Success