The title and "I saw you and I loved you" line reminded me of the Chestnut Tree song in 1984, and the last bit reminded me of "Mr Rock n Roll" by Amy MacDonald - so this immediately gave this poem a heartbreaking effect to me.. Overall the choice of vocabulary is tranquil and melancholy, very skillfully done. Loved it.
~fleur

Wow, girlie. Intense. Very vivid imagery and beautifully written. Flowed well, too. Great work. Great to see you writing agian! :D

SF

Nice use of rhyme. Your right, it does seem random. I couldn't tell if you were talking about two lovers, or yourself and another person. Nice read either way, keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.