|Reviews for Heartache|
| wo bu ai ni le 1/1/10 . chapter 1
Ooh. Radical imagery, yet a great metaphor. Your head blows me up.
| For My Future 4/24/09 . chapter 1
dude this is sick! if it were me id make it longer and add more like imagery and emotion. that would make this poem like seriously heart wrenching! keep up the great work!