|Reviews for Roses|
| wo bu ai ni le 1/1/10 . chapter 1
Rose thorns :) Another great image. 'expect your hand to bleed' - I like the sense of inevitablity here. And the second stanza ( Aww. It makes me want to cry (almost). It's so true :(
| LoonyLuna 7/17/09 . chapter 1
Omg..loved it :D Very nice imagery again..the one word ending was great..very dramatic. Well done.
| LostInMe 5/26/09 . chapter 1
Nice one...original and effective simile. I do agree with Let It Rain about the last word. But it's your poem - do what you wish with it! Either way I like it!
| Let It Rain 4/29/09 . chapter 1
I like this, but the last word (shattered) doesn't seem to fit. It dissonates in relation to the rest of the poem.
Otherwise, really good poem.
| FaithMemory 4/27/09 . chapter 1
I really like this one.. I think, very realistic in some other way :) Nice comparison too. Like it!
| For My Future 4/24/09 . chapter 1
short but straight to the point and awesome man! great concept dude great job!