| Reviews for Roses |
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wo bu ai ni le 1/1/10 . chapter 1Rose thorns :) Another great image. 'expect your hand to bleed' - I like the sense of inevitablity here. And the second stanza ( Aww. It makes me want to cry (almost). It's so true :( |
LoonyLuna 7/17/09 . chapter 1Omg..loved it :D Very nice imagery again..the one word ending was great..very dramatic. Well done. |
LostInMe 5/26/09 . chapter 1Nice one...original and effective simile. I do agree with Let It Rain about the last word. But it's your poem - do what you wish with it! Either way I like it! |
Let It Rain 4/29/09 . chapter 1I like this, but the last word (shattered) doesn't seem to fit. It dissonates in relation to the rest of the poem. Otherwise, really good poem. |
FaithMemory 4/27/09 . chapter 1I really like this one.. I think, very realistic in some other way :) Nice comparison too. Like it! |
For My Future 4/24/09 . chapter 1short but straight to the point and awesome man! great concept dude great job! |