This is quite beautiful-you make the words flow together so well. x]

wow... speechless. this was written BEAUTIFULLY.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work. it would mean a lot to me!

I love the imagery in this so much.

"the sky is compressing the darkness in its lunar mist, a haphazard attempt to clench together the dusk

as twilight sheds its nefarious wings and screams Don't you know who I am!"

We are at war with ourselves-with the universe, yet you reveal the silent screaming of a soul with such beauty I cannot look away from the destruction.

McKinley

Your detail was fabulous, but I do have to say that I didn't quite understand what was going on in the poem. But like I said the imagery and emotion were top notch. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.