wow... speechless. this was written BEAUTIFULLY.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work. it would mean a lot to me!

I love the imagery in this so much.
"the sky is compressing the darkness in its lunar mist, a haphazard attempt to clench together the dusk
as twilight sheds its nefarious wings and screams Don't you know who I am!"
We are at war with ourselves--with the universe, yet you reveal the silent screaming of a soul with such beauty I cannot look away from the destruction.
McKinley

Your detail was fabulous, but I do have to say that I didn't quite understand what was going on in the poem. But like I said the imagery and emotion were top notch. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.