|Reviews for amorphous|
| tears streaming like lies 9/30/10 . chapter 1
This is quite beautiful-you make the words flow together so well. x]
| tonight we bloom 10/3/09 . chapter 1
wow... speechless. this was written BEAUTIFULLY.
i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work. it would mean a lot to me!
| McKinley Cooper 5/24/09 . chapter 1
I love the imagery in this so much.
"the sky is compressing the darkness in its lunar mist, a haphazard attempt to clench together the dusk
as twilight sheds its nefarious wings and screams Don't you know who I am!"
We are at war with ourselves-with the universe, yet you reveal the silent screaming of a soul with such beauty I cannot look away from the destruction.
| Faithless Juliet 4/24/09 . chapter 1
Your detail was fabulous, but I do have to say that I didn't quite understand what was going on in the poem. But like I said the imagery and emotion were top notch. Keep up the good work.