 FaithMemory 2009-04-25 . chapter 1really touching. the story owns a great value, a great lesson for siblings out there! XD And the mother is great, the moon and the sun is completely different but they are beautiful in their own ways. Nice lesson.
Hmm, saw this really confusing line "The younger sister felt guilty to but she to could not control her emotions" I think the 'to' should be 'too'?
But anyways, a great story, awesome value! Keep writing! :) |