Very clever use of words, but it's very complex and vague. It almost seems like an in-joke, it would be great if you knew what it was about, but since you don't you can only dig the pretty words.

Peace, Daze

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I like the description you used here because they were vivid.

I didn't like the theme because it was a bit confusing and I wasn't exactly sure what you were talking about.

Wow, beautiful. I love the color in there - "Innocence stained White." That's really nice. Keep writing! :)