I am so incredibly sorry for being so late. The only comfort I have in this guilt is that I really did have a very busy time that blocked me from doing many things. But anyways enough of that, lets go onto this amazing one-shot!

The beginning really grasps you. The first person narrative is constructed excellently. It makes readers who are familiar with this kind of situation and those who haven't experienced the pain of waiting, both, experience a new material.

The middle of the one-shot connects and clears the anonymity of the beginning of the shot. It's like the beginning lets the readers taste the cake only, not see what the cake looks like...however the middle finally begins to show the frosting, the interior and all that came to make this delicious piece.

The ending was, really, just so marvelous. It was what endings are meant to be. I mean like it really makes you appeased and appreciate the end. It doesn't leave you hungry or annoyed. It gives a finish to every hole opened in the story. The ending is simply relaxing.

Most of all, I love your title. It gives an excellent glow to this one-shot. It has a beautiful, sophisticated sound and picture to it. I enjoyed this one-shot a lot. Thank you for writing it. And extraordinary work! 10/10

hey!
Since you found time to write a one-shot, i think i'll write the oneshot (of the title I made up on my profile- even though the page is still under construction!)
'A Tale Of Two Petals'
i'll make it comedy/romance... the best genre combo!
x awesome story!

It had my heart racing. I was kind of hoping it wasn't a one shot, but then i read the last part. *ouchies*

Very nice and very romantic!

Haven't talked to you in a while...how are you doing?