Wow, it looks like we'll getting closer to the big showdown. It's been a pretty good story so far.

~SirScott

Good chapter. Now, Alex knows who he's up against. It should be a great showdown.

~SirScott

It is most definetly good to see you back bro. It's been lonely around these parts without you, but it is good to hear that you've gotten your life straight for the most part. Anyway, good first chapter and it isn't anything I wouldn't expect from you. Nice progression, great characterization, and of course a good tid-bit of action. Now, only to get Alex his shadow powers...

I corrupt under a new name now but I'm still,
The Madness Soldier...

Nice chapter plenty of good old fashion action. Gary handled himself pretty well.

~SirScott

Great update. I loved how you mentioned the Dirty Harry movies and the cliffhanger at the end.

~SirScott

even though i only had enought time ti skim throught the story what i read was really good keep it up i'll review again when i have the time to read it again. ^_^

Hey Darket its me Sasuke-kun or you you know the guy who gave you drifter. How have you been man. Im great in college got a year and half left. Im going to start writeing again soon i think i've take a long enogh break.

Any ways back to reveiw the plot and charecter devlopment is great,and the blood and action is just as how i remembered. Vince is sick though but i like him. Lol and the part with Zeek and the weed was to funny hiding it in the coffe can alex uses. Well there were a few errors and to help you out i'll post them here so you can fix them.

“More work. I guess this mens I gotta go in early today.” Alex said while making his way for his over shirt.

“Tonight there will be a barge coming in from Israel that has a statue that I've been looking for.” Vince said as h rubbed his hands together.

Anyways good job man and i'll read it when i can. And good job on the essay about our president.

Ack, darn review thing made me click enter before I had a chance to finish. As I was saying...

For CC, you have a few typo's but thats not that bad. Overall, it was a nostalgic and great chapter, you descriptions were great and the whole time I wanted to see what happenes next.

I hope I get to see Alex in the next chapter!

And old fan, Durandel

Its nice to read again from one of the first authors I met on this site, and its even nicer to know that his writing is still as intriuging as it used to be, and is actually even more intuiging.

Your descriptions are great and you have some pretty believable dialouge in your story, that and it has a good flow to it, its really nice. Alex seems like a pretty serious character, but one hell of a badass, thats just me though, haven't seen him fight yet. Vince creeps me out, its pretty gross that he killed four young girls and wanted to know how that cop tasted like... I do hope he meets a demise quickly. I do like your reference to Sin City at the end, it actually made it a cliffhanger and pretty funny.

Great action to unwind after all the work I had to do today. Alex will have his hands full when he has to take Vince on.

~SirScott