This is captivating, Cher. I especially like this last section, where Russell shows up at the end. I want to know what happens. Keep writing. Let the ink flow from your pen-er, let the commands flow from your keyboard.

you should have put the warning at the begining!lol!

This story is really entertaining. It'd be like me visiting you, only you'd be even MORE freaked out at first.

Looking at some of your past stories on FF, I can safely say that this one might be better than those.

Only one way to find out my dear friend. Update! Soon!

Please?

my family is germophobic. :(

Man your good at this, the story is moving at the perfect pace! And your keeping me interested throughout the chapter. (sometimes, people right chapters that put me to sleep in the middle! lol!)

Can you read my story? please? its the only one on my profile.

that was pretty good! the dialogue made sense, and it didn't feel rushed or like it was dragging its feet.

can't wait for the next chapter!