I'm not quite sure how to describe this. Perfect? Adorable? Utterly enchanting? Whatever the term, I'm enthralled. This was clever and funny and beautifully done. You're incredible!

Aw. Cute and adorable! Love it! Awestruck!

ANOTHER ridiculously adorable amazing one-shot! You are master of the one-shot plot development (I wish I could write a beginning middle end in such a short amount of words!) Great job!

OH MY GOD, SO CUTE. Especially that last line. :)

LOWL! That was so funny I cracked up so bad. Especially when Aimee was talking to Toby and then setting up Toby and Charlotte.

Aimee is such a sweet, I love how you made it so humourous, and making Christian just pop up at random times, and then Aimee just says something random etc. (I'm reviewing while I'm reading by the way, noting down my comments before I forget.)

Oh yeah: “How about: the moment our eyes collided across the crowded hallway the thudding of my heart and they way you stole my breath made me realise that you were the tomato sauce on my fries, the power cord to my electrical socket, the painkiller to my period pain, the twinkle twinkle to my little star - without you I am incomplete!” I concluded with a dramatic flourish.

“No self-respecting guy would ever put the words ‘period pain’ and ‘electrical socket’ in the same sentence.” I interpreted correctly.

That was the funniest line I've ever read. Ever. I loved the cute ending. *Insert giant heart*

That was really entertaining and lovely to read, not to mention cute. I'd love to read more of your works. Which is exactly what I'm going to do now. (Y)Your work, made me laugh out loud for the first time in weeks, it actually made me feel better than what I was feeling. Thanks.

xxPbRxx

Wonderful. Amazing. I envy your writing.

i really like this one-shot, itz in my faves!

Holy dingbats, an ASIAN HEROINE! I think I might've just gone into cardiac arrest. In any case, I LOVE (for lack of a better word) LOVE (to emphasize my eternal devotion toward this amazing piece of work) LOVE (for good measure) this one shot! Aimee is just like me except for that the fact that she actually gets the guy in the end. My guy? Nonexistent, up to this point. Tis the absolute tragedy that is my life. (In case you haven't noticed, I'm prone to excessive rambling because I obviously have nothing better to say.)

I would love to read more one shots like this!

aw this was SO amazingly swet!

Brilliant one shot!
Absolutely great :D
Great intro and beautiful ending

raelly cheesy, utterly hilarious, and slightly cringy... unbelievably cute.. i am in love ^.^

hope you keep writin storie like this xD

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Aw hell.
Aw heel.

... You nincompoop! I loved it! =) Now MY vocab is reduced to that of a three-year old's. But oh, so, so worth it.

This was so sweet, it gave me a tooth ache. Not a bad thing =P But seriously, this was so cute!!

This was so well written, outrageously funny, and so cute! I loved it! =D

Aww, I loved this! Great writing! :)