hiya there!! :)

awesome story. blue haired gay man sounds like my friend. and sen sounded hot..until the brace..because then he didnt have awesome abs no more.. :(

confused? what does he mean by give him her heart? like...literally? because that would be gross and unethical. you cant save someone, kiss them, and then surgically remove their stange working heart

ermm...anyways.. :S

update soon its an awesome story!!

ps. BTW I LOVEDD F&L1+2 most awesomest stories ever

thanks for the donation!

this is a funny chapter. sen is so funny. y will sen wan sue's heart?

Hello Hiro,

This is the second story I read after Lipsticks...
I like the way you write, it is different, it seems all the senses have to be alert. You really have to picture the fighting scenes. Sometimes, I even think you should draw the scenes. I can't believe sometimes how violent it is but at the same time, violence, deceat, trust, unexpectedness are part and partle of your stories.
What I like is that at the end of the chapter, I am questioning and just cannot wait for the next chapter. So thank you for sharing your stories ^_^

kAilaN pa Ung OTher cHapter Nito?...

Haha thanks, the rest of the world includes ME, right?! ;)
We call it swine flu here and our schools may even close odwn if it hits 6.2, currently it's 5.9, yay~!!
But OMG I have MAJOR exams, I can't postpone them or how am I gonna get to college with good grades..?!

I LOVED This chapter can't wait for more..!!
I like Sue, not the PERFECT Sumiko-senpai..!! Sue is just too amazing, haha..!!
Anyways update SOON..!!

((PS Hiro do you still do coloring requests??))

xx

the last part really give me a shock... her heart stop beating... yet she is still alive... is she a human?

pls update soon

Usually, I leave my comments on Soompi now as redbutterflytree, but I feel like stopping by here to say that I'm super stoked about Vena Cava!

Haha OMG This is AMAZING...
Me SO reading it...!!
O.o
xx