Jade seemed a little bratty in this chapter ("wow that was so long," "uh, why are you giving this to me?"). I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but the two parts I pointed out made her come across that way.

I did like how smoothly you were able to work her grandmother's story in, though.

-Steph

Wow! Good job! Thats cool how you hook the reader and like tell the grandmother's story...