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Couch Potato Prodigy 2009-04-29 . chapter 1
Very Touching.
Autumn's Last Curse 2009-04-27 . chapter 1
The concept is exceptional: the idea of the mother taking her daughter to the grave with her, knowing, insipires awe. However, why choose to let one daughter live and bring the other with her? A few grammatical errors (Lily's should be lillies) and you wonder how old the author of the letter is, there's a certain maturity about it (she chooses a family for her sister) and a certain immaturity about it (had she been older, she would have known her sister would have wanted more details about this as she grew). Overall, thank you, this was a very enjoyable read!
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