 kazoua 2009-09-23 . chapter 1I am procrastinating. So i'm reviewing you from school again.
Okay, okay. This story started out so sweet, in a kinda... weird unrequited love sorta way. But then itgot sad and then it got creepy. Way to put crazy dynamics, ther. The weirdest thing was that you ended it so nicely. You gave the main such a nice and odd (because potheads are silly) relationship. |
 Sundown 2009-06-30 . chapter 1This was sweet, simple and pretty. And then the end was sweet, simple and pretty...creepy. Which was actually quite refreshing. I like that the narrator didn't suddenly fall into 'he was the love of my life, I feel so guilty that the only option is for me to kill myself too!' melodrama, but was more reserved and confused and just, well, respectful to somebody he didn't know all that well.
'My love for you is like getting in an elevator and pressing all of the buttons.'
That bit was my favourite because I'm immature and I love doing that more than I love some people.
Well written piece :) |
 Twig'um 2009-06-18 . chapter 1Aww that was sad and sweet... totally didn't see the webcam thing coming... *shiver* great ending! |
 crack the sky 2009-05-12 . chapter 1'My love for this story is like a watching the Notebook for the billionth time and crying whenever the title pops up because you know how it ends.'
:D |
 firestar267 2009-04-28 . chapter 1I really liked the style of this, it was nice and simple, the webcam feed was a shock lol, - a good read! |
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