 Abweichung 2009-05-05 . chapter 1 I'm surprised there aren't any reviews yet...I find this story incredibly intriguing.
Yi Jihwan is a very likeable character so far. He doesn't seem naive, but there's something sweet an child-like about him. The setting of the story didn't seem interesting at first, and portraying a civil engineering major as useless raised my hackles (...I'm an engineering major and the intense difficulty of my classes have stolen my life).
As I read on however, things started to make more sense. I guess a poorer/smaller city wouldn't have as much need for engineers. Your sprinklings of Korean phrases add color and depth to the setting, and by the end of the chapter I couldn't help but want some more. To be honest, it was downright hot when you described Shin Haehyul "panting lightly" after pulling away from the second kiss. Something about a man in power losing his cool for someone who should be at a disadvantage is too amazing a concept to pass over. I really hope you go into more detail about Shin's motives... hopefully he's secretly a submissive type? :P
Keep up the good work! |