Ah...

Damn. If reality was like this, because when reading this, it evoked my own dreams and expectations. I love your flow! Also the questions, because this poem is directly addressing (or demanding) the person, to just let go, come along and dream. Keep writing!

Melanie

I thought it flow perfectly.

My favorite lines were: "Past the Milky Way we'll race, and dip down below Orion's belt, Who could have known this place. Who could feel the way we've felt?" Lovely.