I have to say i really enjoyed reading this...you did a good a job and i think it gives a piece of the male mind...]

*Addy

I really like this, it felt natually from a males perspective - I'm going to assume you're female, just from your summery.

I could see an awkward boy in love with some hugly unatainable sex symbol. Great work here, keep it up.

Much love,

Juliet.