 Chaz Nasty 2009-07-31 . chapter 1 Jesus Mary and Joseph this poem is worth more than your whiny little English-lit-fail screed, Ellaminnowpea. You got a number, baby? |
 Ellaminnowpea 2009-07-16 . chapter 1 You are still writing! I'm so happy to see that! I really liked the part in the middle about 'future dwindles, past a joke' because it seems really dark and kind of like its making fun of people who make future plans. We never know what the future is going to look like, after all. Why make plans? |
 Wrath of Cthulu 2009-06-17 . chapter 1 Meridian means a circle around the Earth passing through both poles. Germans, man. They are the legendary dumb. Go fetch me beer and saurkraut and busty bar wenches and a fifty pound bag of discarded children's shoes that their little feet will never be in again ever.
This poem is shocking. The part about seasons blistering is horrifying. |
 der fiddlesticks 2009-06-02 . chapter 1Damn Zen man you have not lost your touch. I am sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while I just moved into a new place with Grandpa and Miko and Kurt and the cats. Man have you been getting my damn emails? This poem kicks ass especially the last six lines. They just need to be repeated over and over. I had to look up the word 'meridian' though. |