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Chaz Nasty 2009-07-31 . chapter 1
I jerked off to the line 'slippery octopus abortion'. Was that wrong? Should I not have done that?

The idea of human beings as cattle is closer to the truth of things than the cheerful rot-infested bullshit pie that the Church feeds us a spoonful at a time.
Wrath of Cthulu 2009-06-17 . chapter 1
Why do you have to go judging people? Were you shaken as a child? Did your mom drink during the gestation period? Damn sometimes I just want to pick you up and smack you in the face, you slippery octopus abortion of a human being.

So anyway, on to the poem itself. The horror of that image, of the deathlike cattle in a line heading toward destruction, is going to keep me up at night.
der fiddlesticks 2009-06-02 . chapter 1
Awesome summary man! I clicked the link like a million times and I am still waiting for my downloadable Zen! I think the link must be broken. You should go fire your service provider. That part near the end, "A procession of cattle with death as its head" and that bit about a line to the sun made me break out in a sweat. Man your depression periods are my bread and butter.
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