oh my gosh. this is so good! i'll admit it took me a few paragraphs to get into it, but man was this good. it was exciting, intriguing, funny, so awesome. i'm not entirely sure whats going on, but i definately enjoyed it! oh and for a little more criticism: I honestly don't see people actually writing "uh" on a post-it. maybe they were thinking that while writing it, but seriously, what kind of professional actually writes it?
good stuff!

sounds cool so far! i love dragons, and this is a very interesting start. The humor is great, and i like your style, too.