ARGH! No! I think you warned me, but still!! I NEED MORE!

Nice =] I like how Addie and Tria get a mention! And m to brownies...

The synopsis of this certainly got me intriged and I have to say the first chapter is keeping me so =]

And I like the inclusion of a Jeep...

And I really like how you have multiple POVs

“You seemed a little freaked out, and I wanted to know if there was anything I could do. Maybe a glass of water, a hug?”
-- love that!

Micah suddenly wished he had his glasses on so he could look at the guy over the rims of them. He settled on raising a brow slowly.
-- and that... I think Micah is my fave...

Wah! That's how your going to stop? but i want to know about Coen and his life, and what Tria and Addie do to help Micah and what that asshole Bryce did (other than the obivous) to Micah. GAH! rats.

I am (not so patiently) waiting for an update. So please post the next chapter.

You know, well at least should know, that even the best of us get writer's blocks. You know I do... Well anywho, when everything gets started again, you live and all, we can ponder this? By the way, remind me tomorrow. Have something for you, Mari! Since I can't get it to you now (again, on my touch), I'll get it to you tomorrow as a late Christmas present.

Love you lots, as always.

-Mel

P.S.-I'll reply to those emails tonight.

Well...you are the author and I guess it is a little hard to write when not inspired...but I'm still sorry about it...I hope at some point you do get to finish it though, but I'll keep my eyes open for any of your other peices :-)

:( I will be very sad to see this story go away for such a long time.

Can your beta not help you work out a plan for this? :/

I really do wish I had the time to co-author a story... but school is a butt. Le sigh. Well, all the best on your other projects, and I'll be seeing you whenever I do. :)

Velvet.

Damn, and I was so happy for finding this story. xD It's awesome, really. I'm going to watch it anyway, and I really hope you'll have the time and will to continue on it some day. Until then, I'll be waiting patiently. m( _ _ )m

Well, I personally really appreciate being told that this is going on hiatus and not just left to sit with no idea what is going to happen with it. I just wish I would learn to check the new "chapter" of stories before I re-read the whole thing and it's a note instead. Luckily, yours is only two chapters and I enjoy it a lot so no harm done.

I truly hope you get the time, energy and passion back to finish this story because I very much enjoy what you've written so far and the characters you've created.

So I'll just leave it at that I'm looking forward to the "nice, fun, complicated, long ass plot line" that you have cooked up in your head and can't wait to see it written out and I hope your other projects go well

Please, please, *please* write some more.

Soon.

This is so good I feel the imminent onset of rabid-fan(boy/girl) disease/obsessive-reader disorder with additional elements of cyber-stalker affliction.

For some reason this piece seems a lot more realistic than Addie and Tria. It could be just because I know a lot less about crime and hacking, but I also think that the personalities contribute: Addie and Tria both seem very intelligent, charismatic, successful nice people, and are a little too nice and quite similar at heart. Micah, on the other hand, is much shadier, Coen less perfect, and I like the realism of that.

There are some typos in this piece of writing, and Coen seems a little too pathetic - though I'm sure you'll develop his character further as the plot progresses.

However, I really like this piece and have only praise for the thus far very interesting plot (can I have some more, please, sir). Unfortunately, I have no idea what book Einstein the dog who likes cats refers to, otherwise I'd ask for a Micah/Coen drabble, so I will stick to saying that your writing is a pleasure to read and a wait for an update with hope.

Thanks,

A.Huiyan

YAY! Wow... wow... this is like a kinda cliffy and i want MORE! I mean... at the end Micah called Coen rite? how did he get a phone didnt he thow his away? AND now i must go reads that other story... that one with those two Addison and Tria lol... and bugg ur friend... hehe

If people actually badger me... I would laugh. Like, really laugh.

Ah, how I love this story. ;3 I love the ending to the second chappie as well, and am absolutely amazed that I didn't review the first one {mental road block, maybs?}...

Well, lots of love for this chapter, and wanting more. And I better get more... and yeah, I need to type...I know. >< {God at just getting home and all that crap}. D;

-Mel

Oh no!! Micah's in trouble. Hope he can get out of this one!

And duude... I WISH I could cook like Coen. That's freaking amazing. I'm lucky not to burn frozen pizzas.

Anyway. Exciting/emotional chapter. I'm so glad you finally updated! I'll try to be patient until you can post the next one. ^_^

Siese

Ack, I loved it but got a little confused about the crutches...he didn't have them in the first chapter, right? Hm, I'm sure you'll explain it later
I vant to know if he called coen or tria...hm I hope it was coen...that'd be cute :-)
great job! Please post soon :-DD