Please, please, *please* write some more.

Soon.

This is so good I feel the imminent onset of rabid-fan(boy/girl) disease/obsessive-reader disorder with additional elements of cyber-stalker affliction.

For some reason this piece seems a lot more realistic than Addie and Tria. It could be just because I know a lot less about crime and hacking, but I also think that the personalities contribute: Addie and Tria both seem very intelligent, charismatic, successful nice people, and are a little too nice and quite similar at heart. Micah, on the other hand, is much shadier, Coen less perfect, and I like the realism of that.

There are some typos in this piece of writing, and Coen seems a little too pathetic - though I'm sure you'll develop his character further as the plot progresses.

However, I really like this piece and have only praise for the thus far very interesting plot (can I have some more, please, sir). Unfortunately, I have no idea what book Einstein the dog who likes cats refers to, otherwise I'd ask for a Micah/Coen drabble, so I will stick to saying that your writing is a pleasure to read and a wait for an update with hope.

Thanks,

A.Huiyan

YAY! Wow... wow... this is like a kinda cliffy and i want MORE! I mean... at the end Micah called Coen rite? how did he get a phone didnt he thow his away? AND now i must go reads that other story... that one with those two Addison and Tria lol... and bugg ur friend... hehe

If people actually badger me... I would laugh. Like, really laugh.

Ah, how I love this story. ;3 I love the ending to the second chappie as well, and am absolutely amazed that I didn't review the first one {mental road block, maybs?}...

Well, lots of love for this chapter, and wanting more. And I better get more... and yeah, I need to type...I know. >< {God at just getting home and all that crap}. D;

-Mel

Oh no!! Micah's in trouble. Hope he can get out of this one!

And duude... I WISH I could cook like Coen. That's freaking amazing. I'm lucky not to burn frozen pizzas.

Anyway. Exciting/emotional chapter. I'm so glad you finally updated! I'll try to be patient until you can post the next one. ^_^

Siese

Ack, I loved it but got a little confused about the crutches...he didn't have them in the first chapter, right? Hm, I'm sure you'll explain it later
I vant to know if he called coen or tria...hm I hope it was coen...that'd be cute :-)
great job! Please post soon :-DD

THIS IS LOVE. Coen's constant belittling of himself kind of annoys me, but he has his reasons and is still awesome.

ALSO I HEART MICAH SO MUCH.

/can't write any type of criticism at all when it comes to you :C

Holy moly! That was something. I love Micah's skils so far, whatever they are. Concerning technology and possibly sending viruses/other destructive things... Brilliant.

I don't know what Bryce's thing is, but perhaps he was an old flame to Micah? A rival? A mistake? Hmm. Whatever business transaction Micah and he had, it seemed important. What is Bryce's true motive?

Again, the reference to the city not being quite so safe. It sets me wondering what the setting/time period is...

Then DOOM! D: It had to have been Bryce that attacked him. Argh! I knew something was up with that guy. He works for someone, doesn't he? Someone wants Micah dead, or at least out of the equation for the time being.

Augh! Yeah, problem with slow updates, I forget a lot of things about characters. :P Like, why is Coen so afraid of people touching him? Or getting near him? Even his family?! That's pretty screwed up right there.

I mean, to be so messed up you can't even let your sister near you... :/

[He heard Einstein, his golden retriever] I see you are a fan of Watchers. ;) I like Dean Koontz, too. Reading one of his books right now.

Haha, Robi is about to get a storm upon his head! He should have never been so foolish, the stoopid idiot. -_-

And uhh..? Wait, what happened to Coen that he would need crutches? D: I don't remember learning about that in the first chapter. @_@ I need to reread it, but yeah... hmm. Perhaps it will be brought back up later?

Aah! And how is Coen gonna help Micah after he's been all beat up and stuff? I mean, the guy is in crutches himself! XD It's the blind leading the blind situation going on here. ;P Aah, but we'll see. Coen will probably get his sister to help him, seeing as he can't drive himself.

I await the next chapter with baited breath! :D

Velvet.

-goes cross-eyed from excitement-

Yay, Drama!

I think Coen's P.O.V is slightly awkward, it doesn't seem like the writing from Micah, maybe add a little more feeling? Eh, I still love it.

update sooN!

I don't really have any clue whats going on, but I want to so bad. I'm in love with this story already. I cant wait for the next update!

OK, I said I was going to read this sometime yesterday, but obviously that didn't end up happening.
I really like it. Micah's already epic, so I knew stuff involving him would be good, but Coen's really cool too. I'd like to learn more about his character, but that would mean that someone would have to put up some more chapters. ::hint hint, wink wink, nudge nudge::

:)

Je s'aime. Please write more, even thought you said you would take a while...it's a really great beginning and I can't wait to see where it goes:-)
Still ADORE Micah!! Coen seems cute; I like his kinda characters haha sue me :-D
can't wait for the next chapter!

WOW interesting! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! Love how Micah is soo cute! and violent... hehehe love his character! Coen is adorable too! Love how hes so hard on himself and nervous!XD Wanna kno bout his backgrounds... seems very interesting... update soon PLZ!

Great, now I'm hooked on this one, too. I do hope you update soon. One chapter was just not enough!

Siese

Aww I love Micah so much! And Coen is adorable, I can't wait to see where you take this!

One word/acronym: wtf? XD

This story is great already, though just slightly creepy. Again, wtf? What's with Micah carrying a knife? And Coen carrying knives as well? Is the city dangerous or something? Weird!

I wish I could pat Coen on the head though, him and his little spaz attacks. He really should get some meds for that. :P Oh, and he should stop being so hard on himself. He thinks he's not attractive, but some crazy, card playing dude with a knife obviously thinks the opposite... wait, is that a good thing? XD

Oh, what will he tell Camilla now?

Hah, I'm glad Robi whoever is out of the pic though.

[“I’m sorry I’m late Coen. My stupid roommate used all my hair gel] He was late cause of hair gel? Nuh uh, no way. He needs to get gone and quick.

[“I’m still Micah,”] It was just there so I had to add it cause of the cuteness...plus it shows contrast between this:

[I don’t think he wants to be covered in your arterial spray, I’m not going to plunge this trusty little fork into your carotid] Again, wtf?!

One mistake: [so repertoire of great jokes] I believe that should be "no".

Great work otherwise, I have to find out more. So I'll be waiting for your update! :D By the way, thanks for adding me to your alerts, I appreciate it. :)

Velvet.