Aw man. I was liking this story but I could see that if it was going to go anywhere good it would have required dedication and loads of time spent on it. I enjoyed the first two chapters and would read more if you ever tried to have another go at it, but I understand :)

This is an amazing start to a story, and I love the characters you've created. They feel like real, fleshed-out people. I'm sad that you won't be updating the story, but happy that I read these two chapters because they're really awesome.

Great story, please don't leave us hanging.

I have to say, I really enjoyed reading this story as well. Coen is absolutely adorable!

NOOOO! I was totally into this! I'm so dissapointed that this might not be continued! I really hope you do. I'm dying to see what happened next, especially since you ended chapter two as you did.

i really hope that you will be able to continue with this now!

i loved Addie and Tira and then there sequel, and Micah so so cool!

That's cool :) Looking forward to when you pick it up again!

Also, I don't think I can say anything to Micah about Tria disapproving now. Ha. He's helping him. And so is Addison. How surprising. Living on the wildside, eh? And I really didn't expect that Bryce would get Micah instead, but he did mention that he was good, eh? I was hoping that somehow Coen would save Micah. But now that I see the extent of his nerves and anxiety, I doubt he could save anyone. Doubt that a lot. And how exactly would he come to the rescue anyway? It's not likely that he would randomly leave the apartment at 4 in the morning for a coincidental walk in the same place Bryce and Micah are. Haha.

o! When I noticed that the third chapter said "Notice". I knew it would say something like this. Too bad, this is your BEST story. I'm sad that you don't have the "steam" to finish it. I'll be crying in the corner... just letting you know.

So I hope someone else decides to write this with you. Really hope. I wouldn't mind doing it but I'm not very reliable so I won't step in. Ha. I have trouble keeping up with things myself, so I hope you do find someone and maybe they can give you more ideas that would inspire you. Good luck. Hope you're back soon.

Aww, how cute in a sick, really scary way. And I love it that Coen's just as scary apparently. Why do they both have weapons and stuff? Hmm. Very interesting. I didn't look at the genre or anything. Ha. Maybe this is action? ;)

And this is Micah from your other story, correct? It's funny how Tria saw him getting into all kinds of trouble and here he is doing what they thought. :D

NO!

I hope you finish this story one day. It's fresh and intriguing.

I'd co-write with you if it meant you continued to write this amazing story. I have to warn you, I won't be able to write as amazingly as you but I'd still love to give it a try.

ARGH! No! I think you warned me, but still! I NEED MORE!

Nice ] I like how Addie and Tria get a mention! And m to brownies...

The synopsis of this certainly got me intriged and I have to say the first chapter is keeping me so ]

And I like the inclusion of a Jeep...

And I really like how you have multiple POVs

“You seemed a little freaked out, and I wanted to know if there was anything I could do. Maybe a glass of water, a hug?”

- love that!

Micah suddenly wished he had his glasses on so he could look at the guy over the rims of them. He settled on raising a brow slowly.

- and that... I think Micah is my fave...