i. am. obsessed.
this is such great story!:) not to mention incredibly addicting. i skipped a day of school just to stay home and finish it! lol! i cant wait for the one shots about their future together!:) please do continue with their story.

m.. BECK. god. yum.

I LOVE IT! SO CUTE! beck is hott, though i gotta say andy would be the death of me, hes adorable. anyways...im finally finished! lol great job : )

OMG WOW I LOVE THIS STORY WOW!! I think you should make a 2nd one to continue but like when they have kids or something idk! But i loved it hope u continue this one!!

anderson is beautiful
but beck is sexy

A great story. However you just dumped some of your characters like Sloan and beck's parents.
Especially Sloan as he was just made to be the bad guy and was never mentioned again. But I liked it anyway!

O...I'm so super duper excited. I'm glad she and Beck had sex...I don't know why, but I am. Ep...I'm so excited and at a loss for words at the same time. All I can say is: GREAT FREAKIN' JOB! =D

~Chelsea Elizabeth

I sat down and literally read this whole thing, all in one go, because it was so good. And Amazing. And wonderful and cool and awesome and pretty much every positive adjective I know. I totally

Carmondy always seems so insecure and shes not my ideal heroine but shes styl ok

OMG! A BASKETBALL SOTRY! I love BASKETBALL! I mplay competitive on Varsity to and, can you guess position? Wing/Power Forward! HURRAY! And I can totally relate to Car so that's really nice. I'm so excited to see how this plays out. Anderson seems really hot but I personally want to learn more about Beck. Yumy.

One critique - because I think every chapter kind of needs one - I think you start of the chemistry between Car and Anderson pretty strong too much in the beginning. I don't know about your school but in mine, the female jocks aren't normally the flirty, change-my-pants-in-front-of-a-guy kind of people. Just my one complaint.

Your story is great! The way you write is just amazing. In the epilogue when Beck was freaking out your writing made me really anxious. So I say kudos to that because when a story can make someone feel that way, it proves just how talented the author is. I can hardly wait for you to start posting another story because your plots and writing style are amazing! Keep up the good work!:)

Jess

Ok, you NEED to make a sequeal because this was just plain f*in' ah-mazing! I mean it! And if you don't that is just mean... and evil.
And it's not like you couldn't think of a plot line for it becuase you so could... Like joining the gang in college and more family problems with Beck's fam and Car's fam becuz they don't like each other and they love each. it's like Romeo and Juliet with basketball. Ugh i want me some Beck. I'm just like CAr too but swimming was my sport. And the bondage/painvspleasure in sex is totally me but alotta guys are into it, at least where i'm from so that bit sucks.
But I spent from 10pm-5am last night reading this story and then again from 12-2. SO I read this whole thing becuase your writing style, smut scenes, and characters are all so addicting. I

I just spent all weekend reading your story rather than actually than finishing up a paper that I have due, but it was worth it. I really enjoyed your fic. I thought you did a wonderful job with the character development of both Beck and Carmondy.

I was a bit disappointed with the way Sloan's storyline ended, though. I thought you did great job integrating him into the story without it being jarring, but his last interaction with Carmondy seemed so out of character, that as a reader, I didn't believe it. I kind-of wish there had been a more amicable end between him and Carmondy, or more of a lead-up to this violent side of him.

I also thought you wrote the intimate scenes between Beck and Carmondy really well and that you were able to make the more risque aspects of intimacy seem more accessible and less taboo.

It was also nice to see that your characters were concerned with protection, but I wished Beck and Carmondy had used a condom too, since pregnancy shouldn't be the only concern; especially since Carmondy joked in the second or third chapter about about getting an STD from Beck.

Overall, I thought your plot was really well planned out. Your writing was solid, especially your first few chapters. So thanks for sharing!!

Aw...I love how Anderson stood up for her and even Beck even if he didn't care what the guy said to her. Okay, I am so behind, but I'll catch up, promise!
Lovin' the story, by the way!
Oh, and thanks again for reading and reviewing my story, it was a VERY pleasant surprise! =D

~Chelsea Elizabeth

I thoroughly enjoyed your characters in this story. I'll admit that it was a little weird when you suddenly added in the bits from other characters perspective. However, somehow, it did seem to work in this story.
I'm sorry someone plagiarized your work. It makes things harder for the honest readers here. And I really hope you don't join the LJ community that Myrika, Bleeding Air, etc created. I have to say that I don't agree with all of their policies. And if you start to get agree about your work being plagiarized, remember that they are truly pathetic and obviously have admitted it to themselves. After all, anyone who could write and felt they could, wouldn't steal someone else's work. Other than that, think of it as free publicity for your work. Okay, prolly not that good a cheer-up talk, but I really enjoyed both Jaided and this story and don't want to see your work disappear as well.
Oh, and thank you, for taking a chance and publishing this story on FictionPress. (and I'm finally creating profile on here so I can be slightly less anonymous)

First of all, I'd like to say I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to review the last chapter! I'm in the middle of getting ready for some really hard finals which is taking up a lot of my time. I loved the last chapter, and liked how Beck submitted to Car. It was nice for a change and very interesting to read. I thought the couch scene was just adorable with how he was trying to cuddle. It really made my heart melt. Now on to the epilogue...I had been hoping that you would have Beck say those 3 words first because I just thought it was necessary to end the story. I'm so glad you did! The way he got really nervous and kind of angry when she was silent, was just brilliant! I'm so terribly sad that this story is over now. I really enjoyed following it for some time. I have to say that this is absolutely one of my favorite stories and that you are a very talented author! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us readers in the near future! -Bri :)