omgomgomgomgomg drama timey :DD i frickin LOVE garen

really good, I can't wait to see what happens please update soon

Aw this very sweet but I really want Caydan and Garen to get into a real fight. One with Garen really hurting Cay but of course they end up back together again.

Yeah summer has been really busy! It's been interfering with my reading (which is not to say that's a bad thing either)! I hope you can work out whatever you're unhappy with in this story. Take all the time you need, I'm sure most (if not all) of us will be waiting to read what happens next.

This chap may have been a little choppy, but I still liked it, well except for Kelsey...ugh...the witch. But I know she had to come back eventually.

I really like Derek, he's growing on me more and more. I'm curious as to why he made the comment "it happens all the time" though? Are our fav twins going to become a threesome?

Take care! :)

Okay. So, Derek isn't as insanely creepy as I thought. But Kelsey and Lena? Bitches. They should be put in a dark pit with the rest of the relationship-destructing sluts.
Hey, cheer up, Effay! I find absolutely NOTHING wrong, out of place or cringe-worthy about this story. At all. Period.
Take as long as you need to recover your muse. Maybe a good long break is what you need to get your energy for writing back. A little Vacation never hurt anyone =)And don't push yourself. If you have to force it, no one will want to read it. It makes for unpleasant, unnatural writing. I'm sure you don't need me to tell you that though haha
It's nice to know that you arn't abandoning this. It's too promising to just leave dangling. So, take some time off, relax, chill out, enjoy the rest of the summer, then (if you're up to it) come back and write more on Garen and Cadyn =)
-Desaki
PS: I'm sorry my review is late =( My poor computer got a virus and we had to fix it. But that's a horrible excuse for sucking at reviewing.
PSS: I really hipe your mood gets out of bleh (=/) and more towards happy (=D)

Wow. it's been a while since you updated. Hope you're okay.

I'm kinda waiting to see what happens next, with Lena and Kelsey and so. I'm sorry to say that... i don't have much to say, this is a quick review too, since i gotta go soon! so i loved it as usual, the beginning of the chapter, i kinda thought it'd be more dramatic, and i was actually really surprised that Lena didn't make a fuss when Cay insulted her.

And of course, i loved the little make out scene x]
Hope you update soon,
~Neo

ack! not kelsey! I dont like her >.<

But I really just want Cadyn and Garen to make up and make hot passionate love haha :D It would make my day

oh geez. are these two ever gonna get things right?
nope. Probably not.

I love Garen's blind rage at the thought of Cayden with anyone else. I dig possessive guys. lol

Derek deserves saint-hood.

Oh and Cayden's out burst at Lena was perfect. He took the words right out of my mouth.

Omg! I totally forgot about Kelsey! O.o
Oh dear, I feel that there's a storm about to happen...poor twins...

Anyway! Good luck with your pc freaking out! And take your time figuring all out ne ^^

Huggles!

OHGODKELSEY. I. Don't. Like. That. Girl. She a ho. Hahahhaa
I sense drama! Great chapter, by the way!

So is Kelsey the one who caught Garen and Cadyn in the pool? Only answer that in chapter updates please? So what's gonna happen to Derek now? Also is he an abused kid, or just gets beat up by his partners, or other people a lot? I can see him and Cadyn as friends since I picture them as two ukes. I kinda thought he'd like Garen more. It seemed there was some drama between Garen and Cadyn, but maybe this last dispute will be cleared up by what Garen learned by talking to Derek? I guess we get some fresh drama from Kelsey though. Great Chapter. Update as soon as you can.

EK! I'm such a HORRIBLE reviewer! I started reading the day you posted, but I was babysitting and the baby woke up and I had to go get him then feed him and never got back to the story! I have to make this a quick review, so I'm so sorry for not sending one sooner. Lena

OHGOD. This is going to haunt me all of my vacation. You suck hahahaha. No you don't, you're awesome. But I think I know who that was with Garen and that makes me mad ahahahaha.
UPDATE SON!

STUPID DEREK, RUINING 'HANGOVER' FOR CADYN. >: (I haven't personally seen it, but whatever.)

AND EVIL CLIFFHANGER. BURN IN HELL, STUPID THING. I won't be able to read the next update before August, Effay! This is horrible!

WELL SHIT FUCK. You know, I used to like Cadyn the best, but now Garen's frustration and mixed feelings definitely beat everything.