|Reviews for Behind Locked Minds|
| Aoide's Anthem 6/4/09 . chapter 20
Okay, it is astonishing to me that this does not have more reviews...so I decided to write another one. This is a fabulous idea, and, miraculously, executed very well, so...kudos? I don't like that word, but either way, fantastic job to all entrants!
| Removed 5/25/09 . chapter 2
Yes, yes, YES! You summed up a loner's feelings perfectly. Especially here:
"“Oh, her? That’s just how she acts…” No, it’s not. Did you know that there was once a time when I could smile and mean it?"
I just can't describe this. It feels so much better that someone out there thinks just like I am.
One question: can I use some quotes from chp. 2? I'll link right back to this story, but these are just too good to pass up.
| A. Simone 5/17/09 . chapter 11
I truly love this. You've done a great job compiling this. Keep updating.
| Elizabeth K 5/13/09 . chapter 9
I would love to have a world like that, but there's so much bad in the world it would be hard for people to be positive and look for the good and use that to change.
| girl 5/10/09 . chapter 7
Wow, I like this a lot and what you're doing. Neat. P.S Reviewing as a whole, not for one chapter. I like them all.
Keep doing this.
| Aurora Johnson 5/6/09 . chapter 4
If it's ok,
can i put up a link to this on my profile?
Cause i put the special ones up there,
and this one kinda is.
If not then don't worry,
but it would be cool )
| Aoide's Anthem 5/5/09 . chapter 4
This. Is. Perfect. There's no other way to put it, so, if you could perhaps pass my message on to the person responsible for heavenly truth, I would appreciate it if you did so. To author/documenter, thank you. Thank you for spelling out the feelings that I could never put into words. I cannot count all the times, the many people that I've alienated in a time of weakness; I cannot express how...disappointed I am with myself for being too cowardly to apologize, how awkward I feel when my lashing out doesn't even faze them. Bravo.
| Aoide's Anthem 5/5/09 . chapter 2
I can relate personally to about half of this poem, having depression myself..."Did you know that there was once a time when I could smile and mean it? That there was once a time when I could dance and sing and feel happy? What happened?" is really what strikes me as eerily accurate. The parts that don't match me are circumstantial-my family is very supportive of me. Excellent rhymes between paragraphs...I can also understand be "addicted" to it; after having it consume your life for so long, you don't really know anything else and that can make it hard to bury your depression and move on...
I hope that some of this somewhat shameful information can help another kid like myself.
No, I take that back. I-we-have nothing to be ashamed of.
| Aurora Johnson 5/5/09 . chapter 3
I love the idea,
it's so different to anything else i've read.
First review woo!
I think this will be amazing once you guys have a few more entrys.