|Reviews for A Play|
| LostInMe 5/26/09 . chapter 1
Ooh...I like that last line - unexpected, and it adds something (though I can't describe what) to the poem!
| wo bu ai ni le 5/1/09 . chapter 1
Lovely poem, the last line takes the cake. The liveliness of the first 2 lines makes the last line especially sad.