Great imagery. I like the idea of this poem.
"with your heart
upon your sleeve,
crossed out in black.
time doesn’t heal,
but you could forget." -These lines were spectacular! :)

ah, this poem is glorious.
"let the colors blur/let the lines fade"
that is so fantastic :)

I like the descriptive -ness. It paints a good picture.

i realy like this :D

nice imagery i liked it alot. the fact you comapared a person and a pinwheel was very creative. keep writing ;)

This is beautiful (sorry that wasn't more original:P) Everything about it was amazing, it flowed wonderfully, the imagery was absolutely astounding, and the message was brilliant. Bravo!