 chaichait 2009-09-09 . chapter 1Awesome story! I love your summary and your characters. |
 HeartLace 2009-07-27 . chapter 1"The growth hormones in beef make it taste better, I swear." I giggled more than I should have at that line, and so many others in this piece! This was pretty adorable! I like how you took such a simple idea of going to the store and made it into such an epic, romantic adventure. I'm seriously impressed! Great work! |
 PredictablyMe 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Okay, I find this hugely ironic, but the advertising right now underneath this story is about pork tenderloins, and I just have to wonder whether you did that on purpose. |
 MarloCarlo10 2009-05-31 . chapter 1Good one-shot! |
 Lily Llynn 2009-05-08 . chapter 1Cliche, but really creative and super cute. I loved this! I'm very glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (: |
 JamieBell 2009-05-06 . chapter 1:D |
 Kendal 2009-05-03 . chapter 1This is short and sweet and really cute. And even better, it's set at the grocery store, which is my favorite place ever. Well, maybe not, but close enough. I totally appreciate the fact that they're wandering through the aisles!
Very nice.;) |
 ImaginarySuperstar 2009-05-02 . chapter 1That was amusing and cute. Keep it up! :) |
 FugitiveGirl 2009-05-01 . chapter 1this was absolutely adorable! definitely a 10/10 line about the tenderloins. great job, keep it up :) |
 x3life 2009-05-01 . chapter 1aw this was so cute!! loved it =) |
 toffeecakesxox. 2009-05-01 . chapter 1that was adorable!
i love Tom's and Rosie's relationship and, ohmygosh, i was cracking up from their grocery store antics. :P
i was gonna write something about grocery stores, but i couldn't possibly compare with this oneshot! :D
-toffeecakesxox. |
 Erisah Mae 2009-05-01 . chapter 1Nice one. Sappy, but not saccharine, and thank god, it wasn't set in highschool. Enjoyed the characters- it's the little details that really make them :).
Thoroughly enjoyed this.
Erisah |
 krabby patties. 2009-05-01 . chapter 1hardy har. this was cute. i love how casual their relationship was. good job. |