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Reviews For: Pork Tenderloins, 249 a Pound
chaichait 2009-09-09 . chapter 1
Awesome story! I love your summary and your characters.
HeartLace 2009-07-27 . chapter 1
"The growth hormones in beef make it taste better, I swear." I giggled more than I should have at that line, and so many others in this piece! This was pretty adorable! I like how you took such a simple idea of going to the store and made it into such an epic, romantic adventure. I'm seriously impressed! Great work!
PredictablyMe 2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Okay, I find this hugely ironic, but the advertising right now underneath this story is about pork tenderloins, and I just have to wonder whether you did that on purpose.
MarloCarlo10 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
Good one-shot!
Lily Llynn 2009-05-08 . chapter 1
Cliche, but really creative and super cute. I loved this! I'm very glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (:
JamieBell 2009-05-06 . chapter 1
:D
Kendal 2009-05-03 . chapter 1
This is short and sweet and really cute. And even better, it's set at the grocery store, which is my favorite place ever. Well, maybe not, but close enough. I totally appreciate the fact that they're wandering through the aisles!

Very nice.;)
ImaginarySuperstar 2009-05-02 . chapter 1
That was amusing and cute. Keep it up! :)
FugitiveGirl 2009-05-01 . chapter 1
this was absolutely adorable! definitely a 10/10 line about the tenderloins. great job, keep it up :)
x3life 2009-05-01 . chapter 1
aw this was so cute!! loved it =)
toffeecakesxox. 2009-05-01 . chapter 1
that was adorable!
i love Tom's and Rosie's relationship and, ohmygosh, i was cracking up from their grocery store antics. :P
i was gonna write something about grocery stores, but i couldn't possibly compare with this oneshot! :D

-toffeecakesxox.
Erisah Mae 2009-05-01 . chapter 1
Nice one. Sappy, but not saccharine, and thank god, it wasn't set in highschool. Enjoyed the characters- it's the little details that really make them :).

Thoroughly enjoyed this.
Erisah
krabby patties. 2009-05-01 . chapter 1
hardy har. this was cute. i love how casual their relationship was. good job.
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