Good...good, just one problem you put: 'He had told himself that was how long he would wait- twenty minutes to find out if it was death by despair, or death by desire.' which is it? Oh and um. 'How do you think Isilthrar created tension in this piece of writing. 'your pet peeves'

I loved this. It was beautiful, but I'm a bit confused at the ending... did he shoot himself or did she shoot him?