Your story needs a lot of work, so here is my criticisms.

“’That sound good’”
“That sounds good”
“and ordered two bottle of
and ordered two bottles of
plural, since two is more than one, it’s bottles.
“’Will you haven’t been making to company money with your models you have only made about 300,0 dollars from sales averagely
these few years’”
reword this so it makes more sense, unless the manager’s character is not suppose to make any sense.
“Will, your models haven’t been producing much profits, as you have only made about 300,0 dollars from the sale of your models averagely, these few years”
“’Why you are you firing me!?’”
I am not sure of the effect here. If you just want him to shout it, take out you
“Why are you firing me!?”
but if you want a stuttering and frustrated effect, perhaps
“Why you, why are you firing me!?”
“’posses a cartel of drugs and weapons’”
“possess a cartel of drugs and weapons”
“my head round and saw”
my head around and saw
“running going through the crowd”
running and going through the crowd
or
running through the crowd
“with a 4L V8 engine was flying,”
with a 4L V8 engine which was flying

“last one exit which I came out of.”
Choose to use either one or exit.
“it had a.”
Has a what?
“a club, behind the car ran towards it”
a club, behind the car and ran towards it
In the first part when he is in the bar, and before it, you want to add more description. Who’s this main character and who are his friends. Describe them in some detail and the surroundings. Add description in between the dialogue.

Why is there such a suttle change from the bar scene when he was with the girl and the firing scene. Could you possibly describe the circumstance in why he was fired. ?The manager telling him to pack his things is unnecessary. “You are fired” along with the reason is probably enough.

What’s wrong with him owning drugs? He isn’t selling them illegally, or taking them and taking them causing him to be drugged in public, in which, the charge would be quite different. You can’t charge someone purely for owning drugs unless the drugs they have are banned, and then they can only be charged for the illegal ones. You have a load of drugs in your cabinet or your house. You have antibiotics, cough medicines, and other druggs. You can’t be arrested for those, can you?
Why would the person the car running. Wouldn’t they turn the thing off, lock it off and leave? It wouldn’t make any sense for them to leave it on.
The driving so fast thing is a bit impossible, as the cars can only go so fast. If a car is going too fast they can easily crash in to a car in front of them. Unless, that is if the highway is empty, and that’s pretty impractical, since Miami is pretty populated and famous. I live in a big city in Callifornia, and I’ve been to the other. You can’t go that fast. Maybe ninety miles per hour at most if one is lucky to have really smooth traffic flow, which isn’t that often.

If he was close enough to snatch a gun out of the police’s hand, then the police was able to attempt to catch him. Mention that.

Again, why would someone leave the car unlocked, and a key inside the glove box? The guy’s either very forgetful, very stupid, or you need to redo that scene.
A criminal refueling a car? Impractical, he would just attempt to steal something else or flee for his life. The polices are so good that criminals don’t have any time or he just isn’t a good criminal.