E.B., you made my day, look at how brilliant this connection is: "Cepheus and Cassiopeia" and "I want us to be constellations." Thanks for brightening my day. :)

"In this fluid flowing Dali painting." Aww, what a lovely allusion--it reminded me of his painting 'Papillons' for some reason.

"I do not fully inhabit soul-compressing rules." Whoa! The tone of this line is incredible--not to mention that it's quite philosophical. J'taime!

"I want to spend many lifetimes watching you." A sweet, heart-warming line. I know this feeling well. Credo nos in fluctu eodem esse (I think we're on the same wavelength) :P.

Delightful piece,
-Isca

I love the confusing sign system, lends the poem an aura of mystery, a cryptic tone of sorts.