This was pretty cute. You may want to work on not using "..." so much in your writing, but a little here and there isn't too bad.

I also am a little confused as to why she's in jail in the first place, but oh well. :D

Ciara

Btw, it's Christofer, not Christopher. Just saying. (:

wow between my friends and me I would probably be Katie. I would be the responsible one. and they would be the ones to snort pixie stix. I like it though, kinda funny.

Lol . . . fun times

[Underneath that, Katie could hear a begging underlying in it.]

This sentence makes no sense since you already repeated the same action

Capitalize sentences and don't overdo with the ellipses.

Don't use exclamation marks more than once when you're trying to emphazise.

Well, I slightly smiled at this story, but it's the typical hyperactive stupid teen friend that gets in trouble and I didn't really laugh outright. Still, it was good fun.