Wonderful as it was, I'm actually glad this story wasn't as long as Emeralds or Secrets... I've lost enough sleep to them already! I can never manage to put your stories down until I've reached the end. Amazing!

So sad your story is so under reviewed it is really good. I have been reading much lately and I am more then glad I stumbled upon this one. Fantasy is my favorite Genera and it seems hard to find good fantasy Slash stories no matter how slight. Just thought I'd say that really enjoyed it and it was more then I was expecting. A whole religion? amazing. And the inner turmoil was well written, and I enjoyed reading about it... I'm always drawn to the darker characters and stories. So, yeah it was really really good!! :D

Hey, I've just found and read your story.
I really like it, it reads like part of a much bigger tale and you could certainly extend it to novel length.

The name thing at the beginning did put me off quite a bit, I quickly give up on stories with too many strange names, but I'm glad I continued reading. You need more of an attention catch at the start.

There's a lot going on in the story outside of the relationship, and the main characters spend most of the time apart which might have something to do with the lack of reviews. This isn't standard fictionpress ware.

You conveyed emotions well and as a reader I felt Treygan's conflicting love for his voice and the pain because of it and was relieved I didn't have to hear him bleating about it. It meant he came accross as a very strong character despite the fact he was largely a scared boy chasing himself away. Also the end was realistic, hope and working things out rather than a magic cure-all kiss.

Anyhow, I liked it and would like to see more from this world.

I just finished your story and I had a few thoughts on why it didn't have many reviews. At risk of life and limb, I can give you my honest opinion. The beginning was a little confusing. The whole same name thing really threw me for a loop. Only my die hard curiosity kept me reading. The next chapter straightened things out, but a story needs a strong beginning to catch peoples attention. Also I felt you spent way too much time on the backround story than the actual main characters. I could tell all about their worlds history, but I wasn't even sure what exactly Treygan felt for Caspian until the end.

This is really good. You made me cry a lot though.

I always seem to read the best stories when I'm procrastinating. I really really liked this. Thank you so much for writing it.

I just read the whole story this weekend, and now I'm sad I didn't read it sooner. this really was a lovely little tale, and I'm glad you thought to share it with the world.

Another wonderful chapter. I've got to applaud your ability to write drama without, well, overdramatizing it. Every scene from the chapter flowed seamlessly into the next. Your tense scenes never overstayed their welcome, and you built the drama up well, so it peaked exactly when it needed to. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

as one who has been lurking from the beginning, this story just let me release a huge sigh of relief for the characters. i absolutely loved the whole thing. is it close to being finished?

Once again, the tactful angst. I wish Lelna's character was still alive, she sounds exactly like the type of strong, yet femenine female character no one can seem to write anymore. Although, I suppose that would thow a monkey wrench into the slash, not to mention the plot. I really can't believe how little recognition this amazing story has gotten. I'll review for the two chapters I skipped when my computer quits blocking the site, and in the meantime, I'll advertize this fic to everyone I know. Keep up the good work, and update soon!

I love how tactfully you write angst. Most people slather it on so thick you can't see past the blood, but you have this finesse for it, only allowing your character enough suffering to keep the scene tense. Great chapter. I pity Caspian.

Ohh, the plot thickens. Nice work with minimal character contact here, just enough to drive readers crazy. Still don't have anything constructive to say.

Am I irritating you yet? Thank you for the explanatory chapter, it cleared up a lot of the plot, yet still left almost everything in the dark. Paradox much? another fine chapter, with fine characters, fine dialogue, and fine scene setting.

And it just gets better as I go! Your characters are engaging and well rounded, and your descriptions really put the reader right there with the crowd. Excellent.

What a well written opening! I'm intrigued, and that, my friend, takes talent.