This is so true. Why do amazing guys like this fall for girls who are so bland? It happens so often. I don't get it.

Anyway, really liked the style you put it in. I personally LOVE poems with short lines like this, they make everything more intense and important, placing emphasis on each little thing.

Yep, this was a really nice poem :)

I like the mechanized part..
I have brown hair and eyes though:(