This was beautifully crafted. It was composed of lovely imagery and although I have never been to Oregon, I felt a connection to this place. Wonderful spacing of the stanzas; I felt the jolting spacing contrasted to the simple images of everyday life.

Lovely piece,

Honest.

I love the way you take simple details from every day life and make it art!

It's beautiful.

Ayx

"The skies I remember most are pale white lines." Beautiful imagery! Soothing!

"The Rose City." Aww! :D

"The storm gets so bad I have to pull off the road." The tone of this final line is phenomenal.

i liked the ani difranco stanza. it made me laugh. kind of short, i felt like it should have been longer.