this is absolutely amazing, i swear my jaw is completely dropped.
so honest, pure, vivid, and raw.
BEAUTIFUL work

Dear God, this is stunning. You description and imagery is flawless, and I love how it almost has this stream of conciousness thing going on. It flows beautifully.

Wow!
This is written with such passion and imagery.
A hidden gem in literature.
Bravo.

P.S. The song title I actually thought of was gravity by A Perfect Circle, but John Mayer is a-ok as well.

God this is powerful. I love it; it's so amazing. I wish I could write this well, I really wish I could.

:hearts and favs:
--~Beezy.