"but really i wanna cuddle just with you"

I think I fainted with the fluffy feelings in that. ;)

I love your poem. It's so beautiful: a wonderful combination of perfectly chosen words, a great tone, great rhythm, stunning imagery, emotion. It's very good.

I love the line breaks in the last stanza
as well as this:
"– chin raised to catch the
tentative rays of light
caressing my face like a familiar
lover"

Beautiful, really.



I would love honest opinions/feedback from a writer like you on some of my work. It would mean a lot.

This is beautiful; you have a very unique style about your work.

The emotions/meanings are very deep, and meaningful but the words and tones that you chose to express them are more on the simple style. It's a strong contrast. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

i love the part after "grade eleven when she ran her hand through..." and the last line is amazing. thanks for sharing your talent.

I like the imagery and wording in this a lot, although I'm not so sure about where you use "wanna" instead of "want to." I don't really think it suits the rest of it.
I like the last line. :) Nice work!

so cute. i really liked it. keep writing ;)