i really like this story it´s very exiting and ones you´ve
start reading it, it´s no turning back ;)

Very cute story!
I like it, Marcus is so cute! =]

Awesome. ;) Marcus is so. cute the way you describe him. xD

I'm really growin attached to this story! Can't wait for more! lol U rock keep writing!

Ahaha Marcus is adorable!

Lol I love her friends.

Lol she has a weird family but they're cute!

What will happen to Corina? Haha. :) Poor girl, nowhere to sleep. Update soon!

This is really good! I wanna see what happens! I hope you update soon!

Tootles,

Roselyn

so, umm. This is hard to phrase without sounding offensive.
But what the deuce? that was the weirdest impression of being drunk..
He didnt know what 'moron' meant?
thats almost as bad as forgetting the definition of 'dictionary'.
...hmm.

this chapter was so funny... when Corina's family celebrated her being late instead of getting mad at her... that was so funny... and when marcus kept calling corina co ri ba! damn... anyway please update soon.

This is absolutely both hilarious and dramatic! Great writing except for a few grammatical mistakes =)
Can't wait for the next update!

hey this chapter was awesome! aw Marcus is so cute! i could literally just pinch his cheeks. lol this chapter was awesome thanks for writing it!! = )

I like the concept of your story. The families seem a little weird and the main character, Corina I think her name is, seems a little childish much of the time. But overall I think if you get a beta, or otherwise read over your chapters to correct spelling and grammer mistakes, your story would be alot better.

aw...marcus is like such a big softie lawl. and the Hales are weird. ==""