I like your symbolism on how love is connected to the elements and being torn apart from someone is like being vulnerable and exposed. Great poem!

I like your idea here. Very inventive.

I loved it!

What a beautiful poem! I really like the exposed to the elements thing and it makes it unique! Don't find many unique poems anymore.

Now this is my type of story. I absolutely love the wording and your definition of being exposed to the element. This is a great poem!

Wow, your poems keep getting better and better. I love how you wrote this one and I really like the line 'exposed to the elements'. Very beautyfil

I love the concept of this poem and the fact that you got the saying out of nowhere. It turned out beautiful and I really love it!