wow.
i'm just...amazed at the talent you have for writing.
i've never been so jealous of anyone else's writing skills as i am yours.
another well written story [:

wonderful! :D keep updating, my dear.

Update soon!

:D

lovely, lovely.

I really liked how she kept going back and relating things to her father.

The descriptions of sex were pretty good, but you could have made it a little more interesting by using better words than "long and hard" and "warm and hard".

I did not like the little French words you threw in there. I understand that he's French, but it would make more sense to me if he were speaking in strictly English, instead English with French words that everyone knows.

OMG please please update it!!

I'm so excited!

Boy...what a teaser :) I like it! sounds very promising!!

Look forward to the 1st chapter being posted up...and hopefully THAT shall be a thousand words longer than this one!

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i do like this a lot. find a way to continue it. :D

WOW...This intrigued me. I would love to read the rest. It was deep but scary at the same time. I loved it!

...I laughed at the blue-green eyes part.
I think you know why.
;D

I can't wait for this!
It's going to be great!

Oh, I liked this prologue. And the cycle of abuse continues--the speaker begins to take revenge by killing other innocent people so that they can feel 'in control' again. It's sad, though, that the speaker must become a monster like their father in order to 'heal' themself. Anyways, the opening line was brilliant, and I hope you write more soon.