that is so sweet... what else can i say but "aw..." lol... makes me smile!! i love it.

aww, this is adorable.
:)
i love Derek.

-toffeecakesxox.

This was really good! While I was reading it I was trying to figure out what the strings bit meant, I actually thought you meant like rope string, then I read about her pulling strings for him, and it was like a light bulb when off above my head:P
Really good job, I really enjoyed it, I'm excited to read more of what you have written:)

This is the kind of story that just makes you want so go "aw"

yihe! =3=3=3=3=3

It's very sweet and easy to read(:

Oh, I'm so happy I read that. It's a wonderful, cute, funny oneshot. :)

Manda

Incredibly cute (and I'm so glad Kirsten was his ex and not the stupid sister cliche) and creative, though I wonder what will happen to Annie and Derek. XD I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:

lovely oneshot i hope u check some of my upcoming one-shots as well

God, I didn't know Edgar Allen Poe wrote that beautifully, you had me there. I just remember, "The Conqueror Worm" and "The Raven", and yeah that eyeball one. Anyways, brilliant yet again. And I think this story took the cake out of all your others for the smooching scenes to commence, what? A week? Oh no wait, rubber ducky was the one. Okay anyways, cute. You would think I'd be crazy at the squeal, excitement schmooze I did at the kissing part. Your just so talented. No sentence fragments or like run on sentences that I noticed, or grammatical errors. And I especially, especially love that you threw, "Land Before Time" in there, 'cause jeez they sure do have a lot of them, and I so remember being addicted to those as a kid. Cute, once again. Really your good at short stories, I mean, 15 chapters just waiting for a full blown make out scene and to finally say what's in their heart? Waste of my time, although there are good twists in stories I've read like that. And I can read for like half an hour, finish one of yours and be all giddy for an hour or 3. So thank you. Nice. Okay, Jesus christ this is long.

It's cute, especially Derek. Although there were some minor mistakes:
you’re supposed to manning
“No kidding,” I murmured dryly."
And something about the ending seems wrong. I know it's a summation of Annie's realizations, but it feels like it hindered the story's ending tone rather than provide it. Perhaps it's because it sounds like a list rather than closure.
Other than that, it's a cute plot. Very fluffy, with witty references and lovely conversations. c:

sweet.

*squeal* THAT WAS SO CUTE! but u ended it...:( XP...looking forward to more stories :)

Very sweet and cute!

It's cute! I hope he'll keep his job, lol ^^