that is so sad im really crying now i cant stop

Harro... I believe that you are familiar with me by now... :P. Anyway, I was curious to see what kind of things you wrote and so I read this. It's interesting but you should probably fix your grammar... (if you haven't noticed my grammar is pretty good, lol.) Anyway, yeah, some of the i's weren't capitalized and all, so please fix... otherwise, it's nice :D -JSM

Wow really sad story, kind of morbid how you brought the main character into the storyline. But it worked, however if you did make a story out of this we will all know the ending. The only mistakes I could find were minor, sometimes you were missing words here and there and you missed some letters while typing. But I understood it, it was still a powerful story and if you don't continue then write another and start from the beginning so I can read and review it! :)