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Louis Denair 2009-05-05 . chapter 1
Ah, yes I too felt the whiff of summer reading this poem. In fact, without the first stanza, there wouldn't be much room for interpretation. As it is, there is a universe of possibilities :) Anyway, positively electrifying imagery. Mad, twisted Aztec gods make for some disturbing nightmares imho. Love the white rabbit, kind of reminded me of the rabbit from Alice in the Wonderland. I like this very much. It's ambiguous on the subject matter but consequently all the more thought-provoking.
Isca 2009-05-05 . chapter 1
"The white rabbit." I had a white bunny, once (not that that has anything to do with this poem :P).

"Aztec gods." Which god(s) were you referring to in particular? I'm trying to remember any that 'ate their own arms' or had 'whale insignia.'

The rest of the poem is cute--summer love's in the air, hmm? ;)
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