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Isca 2009-05-05 . chapter 1
"Orange chariots of fire airlift us home." Aww, that's so beautiful. Nice ending. The word 'airlift' suggests that we need to be saved. Interesting. I also liked the mixture of nature/life-forms/science in this poem. :)
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