UPDATE ASAP!

They seem so cute together. And I like her pretend phone call, very amusing. Update soon?

nichloe

jake is such a meanie. i dont like him at all!! but on the other hand, i love caden! he's so funny!!
can't wait for the next chapter!! this update just made my crappy day a WHOLE lot better!!

Cute story.
It has good potential.
The only thing that got annoying was every single person's point of view. I can understand why Caden and Emma need one considering the story is about them. But Jake, Cassie, Alden etc don't really need one..
Like the whole grocery store scene? It could have been told in just Emma's point. Cassie didn't do anything except look at something. And Jake, we saw the same thing in Emma's eyes plus the fact she thought he was an idiot.
To be honest, I got confused pretty quickly when you started changing them all up.
Sorry if that sounds harsh, I didn't mean for it to be.
Just something to keep in mind so you don't lose readers. :]

hehe those little missions sound so funny! agent chivalry?! cant wait for the next chapter! will that be the party?? i hope so!

lol cute.. i don't think caleb is really that bad... deep deep downt you know... lol

It's been a while with this story. I like the whole idea with the party tasks, sounds fun-ish. Glad you didn't abandon this story and update as soon as you can!

Nichloe

Oh yes. :)

Agent Kitty Cat?
haha
Caden is good. :)

love the assignment. cant wait to see if she follows through and how.

You had better update this soon! Or let my death be on your conscience! Please

this is such an original storyline! i really like it as well, and i bet cassie is going to get her heart broken by jack... (is that his name? sorry!!) he seems like a bit of a jerk

update soon!! pretty please!

i like how you switch POVs. it gives the reader an inside look at what everyone is thinking :]

Great chapter. How many point of views is this story going to be in? I like that it's a lot. Oh wow, what does Taylor have against Emma and I feel bad for Alden. He's out looking for Kaleigh, but she just thinks he's some pathetic guy. Update soon, on all of your stories!

Nichloe

hey!

kool story. hope theres a fast update !! and im kool with short chappies...

unLuKy