That was really cool...the style you wrote it in was just so different. I loved it! The description was absolutely beautiful, especially the phrase "crown of yellow dand-e-lions"...absolutely gorgeous.

*lots of words*
Holy crap. (not that all crap is holy.) this is freakish awesome. Literally and absolutely. Way coolzeo! XD

-GumGum

I liked how your style of writing it into a poem.