Totally awesome. :)

Ri

It's funny how this voice says "It’d kill me if you never knew, ever."

Because presumably, if its the end of the world they will all die anyway!

I acctually like this, you have a good sense of voice and alot is said with so little acctually being said.
Well done

I totally understand this. And this is amazing. and as weird as it is, I started crying when I was reading this.
Maybe I am just totally over emotional. but I love it.

I really do.
I just love it.
and I can't explain how much I love it.
I just do.
and I understand.

Interesting truly, i am inspired to think that an idea centered around the end times is not cliched by an overbearing wall of water or the great wall of china crumbling into dust. Sometimes simplicity gives a humbler outlook on the important things and here you have displayed a sense of emotional connection without pouring on with the "L" word, that separates your interpretation of the end of the world from others.

Love the voice of the character/you(?)! I always end up rambling too.

Oh, that was so... cute. Heartwarming ^^ It would have been great if it was longer, but it's great like this just the same.

How cute. But why not make it longer? I want to know more about the character and her confession and why is the world ending again?

I love the tone of this. It's so overdramatic that that it makes the ending pure win. And the character you created is so clever and uncertain that I just liked her immediately. Plus, the point of view you used really complimented the idea of this.

I guess when I read it, it all seemed really silly. /But/ I enjoyed it for that. The short length, humorous ending, and fun characters- all very well done, especially for such a short piece. Great job :D

This story had me instantly hooked. You can imagine the character clearly with their personality. Skillfully, you've managed to insert some conflict in the character without using any other characters. The monologue is very diverse, with different literary elements and the emotions are very expressive. I especially enjoyed the last line; the lines before revealed the narrator's determination, and in the last line we can clearly see the narrator's uncertainty.

This made my heart leap (despite the fact that it's the end of the world.)