AH! I love this story! I love the world that you've created... or two worlds, rather. The characters are interesting, too, and I can't wait to read more about them! Please update soon!

She is awesome and I love the twins :D

Please continue!

bookie xx

MaeMaes MaeMaes MaeMaes!!

Seriously... I'm spewing that I didn't find this wonderful fiction of yours sooner. But nonetheless I've found it and caught up to this latest update and... and I'm enjoying it!

Loving the whole "two different worlds"and magical powers. But most of all I heart the characters you've managed to create with that imaginative head of yours. They seem so believable and I HEART Darius' character. In a way it's funny how he isn't egotistical considering he has the entire school swooning over him!

You've made him cute and sweet :) Was absolutely curling in embarrassment at the whole walking-in scene haha!

The only beef I have is that you left me with a cliffhanger! I'm waiting for Darius to hopefully save the day!! :)

JM

I like this story a lot but you left a cliffie :( oh well, it adds to the suspense. Btw, im ur 100 th reviewer! Woo hoo!! Lol :) update ASAP

aw, cliffhanger! Great story so far!

Oh no!
What's going to happen now?
A-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h!
Don't die Aislin!
Update! ;)
x reeka

hi please edit heart lotion spf so vena can put up the 13th chapter please

Wow, this is really good. Keep writing!

Woah, the ending...

Nice!

this is so cool.i love it.
i like how you go from one person's view to the next without breaking character.
:) good job.
p.s: i'm so favoriting this!

oh ** oh **
troouubblle

update soon please

AHH! D=
While cliffhangers leave me checking the author’s profile page everyday (even though I’m subscribed to them) I must admit it is nice to see a well executed cliffhanger like this one. Opposed to cliffhangers that stop simply in the middle of a fight or something like some other authors tend to do.
With that being said I cannot wait for your next chapter!

Tehe. Dani makes me smile. =D I can't wait for the next chapter! >.

It's good so far but I'm disappointed that the chapters are so short because I just want to keep reading. Congrats on the SKoW nomination and I can't wait for more!